Peer review of rough edit

everyone thought i was pretty cool, although it was unfinished they could see the vision, and have high hopes for the final edit 

Strong stylistic direction with the colours and graffiti 

Music Video Feedback 

 - add narrative element

 - make visually interesting 

 - make clips sit well with song 

     Action Plan

 - include After effects, something colourful and fun

 - film some more (narrative and dance) 

 - slow down certain clips/

Minor Tasks Feedback

 - tiger print and gold elements a bit random

 - use more 'DIVA/BOSS girl' poses 

 - have simpler backgrounds to make 'tyla' the main focus

Action Plan

 - either replace w something else, or somehow incorporate it into the music video (BE INTENTIONAL)

 - do a photoshoot 

 - reshoot some footage 

 - rethink costumes, find something a bit more out there